How are these rap lyrics?

First Let me begin with I am a 15 year old overweight white tech nerd
rapper. I was feeling depressed when I wrote these feeling down about
how I feel like I will never go out and have fun and find someone to
Love. Well I know I may be young but I wrote these out of true
emotion. I feel like everybody is blinded by having Sex, Partying, and
finding your lover, causing me to write this. So here it is, It is
called The Three X's:

Chrous:
Sex, Extacy, and Love
These are the three X's
For this man confesses

Sex,Extacy, and Love
These are the three X's
For these are the Hex's (x2)

Verse 1:

Lost in this blue world
Controlled by you
Lost, Clueless
Don't know what to do
Im screwed
People look at me in disgust
Time for my world to crumble down in this rust
Im done
Life is turning to dust
Living to much
on the inside is just to rough
Nothing going for a white boy
So I'll lean on this crutch
Can't fix my problem
Ive had enough
These days
Nothin turnin up
Burnin up
In my world full of hate
Keepin to myself to
keep me in my state
Wish you had these problems to relate
But right now I'm a loner
No one will find me
So when I die
I'm a donor

Sex, Extacy, and Love
These are the three X's
For this man confesses

Sex,Extacy, and Love
These are the three X's
For these are the Hex's (x2)